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A Phanfic...
by Leah Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:20 pm
Hey everyone,
I tried writing a fanfic for the first time today!bet you can't guess who it's about (
)
I've also entered it into this writing and graphic contest :3 (good luck everyone who enters!)
I hope you like it! <33
What did you think? It's my first fanfic so it's not going to be perfect, but I don't think I did too bad considering it's my first time c:
Please leave a comment and tell me how it was!
I tried writing a fanfic for the first time today!
)I've also entered it into this writing and graphic contest :3 (good luck everyone who enters!)
I hope you like it! <33
- click for a fanfic:
- i wrote it today:
- it's a very fluffy fanfic:
- so sweet it will rot your teeth:
- ok are you ready?:
- let's go... click! <3:
- btw it's about dan having a nightmare and phil comforting him. it's very sweet:
Just a Dream
Phil looked at Dan, his red eyes angry, his black hair messy.
Dan found this so wildly attractive, but this wasn't the right time to tell him this. Although something in his fuzzy, hazy mind was telling him he didn't quite look normal.
"I'll never love you, Dan. You should know that by now."
"But Phil, every night you tell me you do! Don't you remember?" Dan felt tears forming in his eyes.
"It's fake, Dan. Of course I don't love you, you IDIOT! Who would love a man who looks boring, doesn't have any talents, and has nothing interesting about him?"
"YOU, Phil! You always tell me you love me no matter what? Why are you being so horrible to me? I've never had someone as loving as you, now you're turning against me!" Now Dan was absolutely sobbing in disbelief. How could Phil say this to him? He seemed so innocent, now he was making Dan feel like he was absolutely nothing.
"Well Dan, maybe you shouldn't have uploaded that video of me eating the pig!"
"It was a MISTAKE, Phil! A MISTAKE!"
Sobbing intensely, Dan cuddled into his comfort toy. Tears were flooding down his eyes and his pillow was saturated. He felt trapped in a flat with Phil after he'd said such horrible things to him. He tried to keep his sobbing quiet, but he couldn't stop himself after what he'd just experienced. He suddenly felt confused about the "video of Phil eating the pig", but he couldn't quite work out why.
"Dan?"
It was Phil's voice. He sounded less sinister. Dan was still crying, hugging tightly to his toy. He now remembered that this toy was Phil's, but he still hugged it nonetheless. He needed something to hold, now that Phil had been so horrible to him.
"Oh my God Dan, what's wrong?" said Phil.
Dan was angry at Phil, though a tiny part of him was happy to see him for some strange reason.
"Phil! How could you ask that, when you've literally just told me that I'm useless!"
"What? Dan, I have no idea what you're talking about." Phil said, looking very confused but a little sympathetic.
Dan looked into his eyes, confusion hitting him like a truck. Blue? Why were his eyes blue? And why was he being so...? Oh... Things started to make sense now.
"Wait, Phil... I think I had a dream." Dan suddenly realised why he couldn't remember the video of Phil eating a pig. It wasn't real. He suddenly giggled in his head at the thought of such a video existing. He felt comforted seeing Phil with his lovely blue eyes rather than his scary red ones in the dream. Dreams can be hella strange, thought Dan.
"Ohhh, that makes more sense. You poor thing. " He stroked Dan's hair and kissed the top of it. Dan smiled up at him, delighted to see him being himself again. Phil wondered what the dream was all about, although from what Dan was saying when he first came into his room, he had an idea.
Dan smiled up at his boyfriend with shining eyes, but a part of him was making him upset, and he had to get it out.
"Oh, Phil. I've disturbed your sleep just because of a stupid nightmare. I'm such a massive idiot," sighed Dan, looking down.
"No you're not." Phil smiled at his curly-haired boyfriend. He knew Dan was embarrased. He found what Dan thought was his flaws adorable. Even though he looked sad, he looked so cute tucked up in bed with his soft toy looking up at his older boyfriend with shiny eyes.
"I feel like one, though." Dan said, sighing again and looking down.
"Come on, baby. I'll keep you safe tonight." Phil said in his husky tired voice, which Dan thought was incredibly sexy, and Phil knew this. Phil took Dan's damp hand and pulled him out of bed. He gave him a quick kiss and smiled at him, as they walked out of Dan's room.
Phil opened the door and, still holding Dan's hand, brought him over to his bed. He tucked Dan up in his bed and admired his cute younger boyfriend tucked up in his own bed gazing up at Phil all tired. He quickly made his way to the lounge and took the Tetris lamp and took it to his room so it wouldn't be dark and scary for poor Dan. He closed his door, turned the lamp on in the distance, then got into bed with his boyfriend. Usually Dan liked being "the big spoon" - he'd even admitted this on a live show - but tonight he knew that Dan was too tired and scared to be protective of Phil, instead, he needed to be protected himself.
The two boys gazed at each other, lacing their hands together.
"Night night, Bear. We'll have sweet dreams now, baby." Phil said quietly.
Dan loved it when Phil called him Bear, and he also loved it when he called him "baby". He smiled as he looked into Phil's bright blue eyes. You could go swimming in those eyes, he thought, like he'd once commented on one of Phil's photos.
"Thank you, Phil. I love you. Even when I'm being pathetic, you never make fun of me."
"You're not being pathetic! And why would I want to make fun of you? I love you too. I'd never want to make you feel like you're not worth everything to me, when you are."
They both loved it when they were just being cute together like this. No arguing, no distractions, just pure love. Dan smiled at Phil again and Phil couldn't resist smiling back as he adored his boyfriend's dimples forming from his big smile, his chocolatey brown eyes looking into Phil's bright blue ones, and, of course, his beautiful brown curly hair that he always straightened even though Phil and most of Dan's fans found his curly hair so much more attractive.
They kissed each other softly, then Dan turned over, looking at one of Phil's little lions sitting on the dressing table, and smiled, feeling so much safer in Phil's colourful room rather than alone in his own dark room. Phil cuddled his boyfriend from behind, comforting him with his arms around his waist. He played with Dan's curly bed hair until Dan fell asleep in Phil's arms, and once Phil knew his boyfriend was quietly purring in deep sleep, he fell asleep smiling with his arms around him.
What did you think? It's my first fanfic so it's not going to be perfect, but I don't think I did too bad considering it's my first time c:
Please leave a comment and tell me how it was!
Last edited by AmazingLeah on Mon Apr 06, 2015 2:01 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Changed the title of the post :3)
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Re: A Phanfic...
by Moira Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:47 pm
Aw omg this was so adorable! I absolutely loved it c: <3
Also, thank you so much for entering this into our writing and graphic contest :DD
Also, thank you so much for entering this into our writing and graphic contest :DD
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by Leah Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:48 pm
thanks so much! I kept reading it over and over and I fangirled a bit myselfCamryn wrote:Aw omg this was so adorable! I absolutely loved it c: <3
Also, thank you so much for entering this into our writing and graphic contest :DD
no problem, i wish everyone entering good luck :3 <3
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by Hazza Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:50 pm
I love it and it's amazing! Thanks for entering it into the contest<3
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by Savanah Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:52 pm
Wow I love it! <33 It definitely doesn't seem like your first fanfic!
Thanks for entering the contest. (:
Thanks for entering the contest. (:
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Re: A Phanfic...
by Leah Mon Apr 06, 2015 3:57 pm
Thanks guys ahaha and it really is, I've never written anything before
and it really is, I've never written anything before
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by MollyFlyer Sat Apr 11, 2015 8:54 pm
. . . gotta say I was confused there. The last multifandom site I was on that used the term 'Phanfic' used it to refer to Phantom of the Opera fanfic.
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Re: A Phanfic...
by Leah Sun Apr 12, 2015 10:24 am
ahaha yes baeth 
and oh I meant dan + phil (phil + dan = phan )
and oh I meant dan + phil (phil + dan = phan )
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by Leah Mon Apr 13, 2015 11:12 am
aww thanksAgBearPalsRocks wrote:Wow, so detailed!! I love it!!!!!
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